Module Three Critique

For my critique, I chose to watch Sarah Lim’s Module 3 piece. I thought that the video started strongly. I liked the introductory narration and thought it was timed well with the music. It provided many shots that helped support the argument she was trying to make. However, one thing that I thought was distracting was including clips with some form of music in them while layering the additional music track over it. Furthermore, although there was a great variety of clips, I felt things seemed to drag on during the middle of the video, and some things were repeated more than necessary, such as multiple shots of food. Lastly, I did like how she brought her narration back in at the end of the video to parallel the beginning and reinforce her argument.